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Saturday, December 13, 2008

I Miss You

I miss you ........... i really do
The me in me ......... the you in you
Things would change .......... i knew
But i didn't expect it from you!
Imiss you

I miss you ........... i really do
When i cried; your hand on my shoulder
The feeling that you'll be around when i get older
In your eyes the tears of care
Feeling of desperation when i was in despair
I miss you

I miss you ............ i really do
When we sat for hours without a word being said
When you were hurt and my heart bled
When you looked at me and i knew what you'ld say
Your presence on starry nights and on sunny day
I miss you


Sometimes i wonder....
If this is how it was meant to be
Like owning a bird that's destined to be free
It belongs to you ...but you don't own it
Your true love you wish you had shown it
But that time has gone by
I regret every bit of it, but i won't cry
Coz i know when i cry this time round
You aren't there to hear my sound
No hand on my shoulder
And the thought that you wont be around when i get older

All this would really kill me
The agony and pain that i've been through; you won't see

Whats keeping me going and i wish turns to be true
Like i miss you, someday you'll miss me too

4 comments:

  1. Very well written my friend.. good emotional stuff.. I loved the way the story moved fwd in the poem... keep it up..

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  2. beautifully written
    simple,sweet n bang on

    looking forward to reading more of your masterpieces

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  3. hi buddy
    Simply wonderfully written
    I was waiting for ur blogs for long.a creative writer as u started quiet late but i hope u will make up now by writing more often now.
    So in this hope i am following ur blog

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  4. Words fail me with your thoughts so pure
    To kindle this creativity for ever, must you ensure.
    Awesome stuff baby...waiting for the RAP audio

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